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[My GOD, Robots! episode 2]

Omg the sound!

The animation and graphics are great. But where are the sound effects? Its like watching a building explode in silence, it just looks stupid.

And if you're going to use looping mouths, make sure they start and end at the end of the voices. Nothing bothers me more than badly sync mouth loops.

[XnC Episode 3 Trailer]

OMG- My Ears

Fix the audio, along with a sound fx glitch. "The fatguy=change machine" played about a minute early, overlapping with the normal dialogue. Then it played like it was suppose to later.

[My GOD, Robots! pilot]

Good and Bad

The animation was GREAT. But the plot, it was very random and disjointed. This created a lot of plot holes. I can understand this since its just a pilot, but you'll need to make the movie's script clearer for the actual episodes.

The Voices were a bit muffled too, and the unsync'ed mouths got annoying after a bit.

[Mario Short#1]

Fight Scene was nice

You should have put a "PARTY HAT" or one of those random things on Luigi, that way you wouldn't have to blantly write "It was a suprise party for mario" at the end. Having to explain that kinda stuff tends to kill the entire joke :P

Was this the same thing you posted earlier(forum)? Just with more koopas?

swiftstylerX responds:

No, this is an entirely different flash.

[J-B Fight 3D!]

Neat

But this could use some cartoon violence, like blood, or just something less Subtle (Tom and Jerry).

[StickToons Ep1B]

Hidden restart button

Between the bomb scene and the scratch board, there is a hidden button in the bottom right. I clicked on it and it restarted fightscene about halfway through. Wouldn't have been bad if the credit music and the fight music weren't overlapping.

BTW, great job animating the cartoon :) ALthough it seems like you gave up with the plot entirely.

ZT responds:

Hidden restart button? Lol.. wtf? This, ladys and gentlemen, is known as a glitch. Yep, sometimes the fla gets so jam packed of crap that it explodes in a fiery rage of glitchyness. Hahah, thanks for the review ^__^
<3 ZT

[dark light trailer]

Much better than that preview you showed

Too much zooming though. I feel as though I'm in first person, but the main character is in front of me.

Xionico responds:

XD thanks lol, much thanks for ur reivew

[Kupa's Comics: Reparation]

Please make more Comic_Flashes

And ingore the feelings of sensitive people.

KupaMan responds:

Don't worry. I already do that.